I Remember So Very Well

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By Poetic Fool

I Remember So Very Well


I remember so very well
when my lonely heart you stole
how could one I didn't know
so entrance my very soul?

I remember oh so well
when first your hand touched mine
some strange magic you possessed
simply overwhelmed my mind.

I remember and often dwell
upon our first embrace
the feelings that swelled within me
and caused my heart to race.

I remember the yearnings stirred
when first you kissed my cheek
and gently danced your lips on mine
yearnings of which I dare not speak.

I remember, ever fondly,
sharing cares and dreams and prayers
untold hours spent with you
during which our hearts did pair.

I remember, for it was hell,
when for a time we'd part
such fine, exquisite torture
was inflicted upon my heart.

I remember, and always will,
the words I longed to hear
that you so very loved me
first breathed into my ear.

I remember, how blessed I was,
when I asked you for your hand
how the world just fell away
when you claimed me as your man.

I remember, as if frozen in time,
how you looked that on day
never a more lovely creature
had God fashioned from clay.

I remember dreams we shared
the family that we planned
to grow old and gray together
to walk forever hand in hand.

I remember when the bell did ring
it was such a cold, dark day
the pall of the officer at the door
told me all he could not say.

I remember so very well,
thinking this had to be a dream
but it was real, not a nightmare
and all I could do was scream.

I remembered, it was all I had,
wistful thoughts of you,
pieces of our life together,
not knowing what to do.

I remembered, as time passed by,
not to moan and mope and grieve
but rather what you'd have me do
to live and laugh ... and breath.


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jdflom Level 2 Commenter 12 months ago

Another great one. This begs me to ask if this is based on a true story or not? You don't need to answer though, but it definitely left me wondering.

I think you said a lot without being direct and it really worked. Powerful and beautiful.

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 12 months ago

Oh my goodness, this is so sad, yet very beautiful. I hope it's just poetry......

jami l. pereira 11 months ago

Beautifully sad , voted up awesome and beautiful ! great work ! :)

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Huey19 Level 1 Commenter 11 months ago

Your poetry hits me where it counts every time. Whether this story is true for you or not, it is similar to a true one for me. I loved it, and love the passion in it the most. Great write.

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Poetic Fool Hub Author 10 months ago

Thanks so much always, jami and Huey19. Somehow I missed you very nice comments. Thank you.

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snakeslane Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Nothing prepares us for this kind of loss, it is such a tragedy, you can spend the rest of your life trying to piece it back together and you've done that in this poem. Good work!

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Poetic Fool Hub Author 8 months ago

Thanks again, snakeslane. I appreciate you reading and commenting on so many of my poems. Getting feedback on a variety of them is very helpful to me.

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htodd 2 weeks ago

This is really very nice ..Thanks a lot

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Poetic Fool Hub Author 13 days ago

Thanks, htodd. It really is appreciated very much. Have a wonderful day!

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